Elementary IIDaniel Castañeda Peer-Review Checklist (Last Posting) In order to do this peer-review, first you need to watch the video segment embedded in the blog (or in Vista/WebCT). I. First impressions a. What did you like best about this essay?II. Are there any places where ......... a. the writer should add more descriptions or details (the imperfect)?b. the writer should add more main events (the preterite-move the story forward)b. the organization of the text is unclear.c. language isa. ...inappropriate for purpose and audience?b. ...difficult to understand?II Summing up a. In which specific ways could this text be improved? c. What do you think needs the most revision? For instance, conjugation of verbs, use of the right tense, etc. Provide specific suggestions.
Elementary II
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Peer-Review Checklist (Last Posting)
In order to do this peer-review, first you need to watch the video segment embedded in the blog (or in Vista/WebCT).
I. First impressions
a. What did you like best about this essay?
II. Are there any places where .........
a. the writer should add more descriptions or details (the imperfect)?
b. the writer should add more main events (the preterite-move the story forward)
b. the organization of the text is unclear.
c. language is
a. ...inappropriate for purpose and audience?
b. ...difficult to understand?
II Summing up
a. In which specific ways could this text be improved?
c. What do you think needs the most revision? For instance, conjugation of verbs, use of the right tense, etc. Provide specific suggestions.